A Robin Hobb Rereading Series: Entry 359: City of Dragons, Chapter 9

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Following a short, sharp rebuke of Kim by Detozi, “Return to Cassarick” begins with Leftrin approaching a Cassarick aware that he is inbound due to the Tarman having encountered fishing boats that raced ahead of them with news for the city. Leftrin’s preparations for return to Cassarick and reporting to the local Council are noted, and the local terrain and conditions are glossed as Leftrin approaches his home port. So are other ships afloat as the Tarman comes into a berth and is moored, and Leftrin issues a series of orders to his crew. And, buoyed by his crew’s confidence, he sets out to collect the fees the Council promised.

This one seems a flighty sort.
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Elsewhere, Malta regards herself and her burgeoning pregnancy as Reyn tends to her. The two tease one another as they confer until interrupted by news of the Tarman‘s return. Thus informed, the pair proceed towards the meeting of the Traders’ Council they know will ensue, proceeding with care due to Malta’s pregnancy.

Leftrin purposefully makes slow progress towards the Council meeting, his dealings along the way summarized. At length, he arrives, and the arrayed Council that greets him is described–including Sinad Arich, whom he remembers meeting and whom he suspects of perfidy. Being recognized, Leftrin makes his initial report and presents his claim for agreed-upon payment. Questions and challenges from the Council follow, some of which are pointed, and Leftrin’s response to certain of them is decidedly legalistic but technically correct, emerging from conference with the close-reading Alise.

The emergent uproar among the Council is quieted and the meeting continues, with more questions for Leftrin that he addresses. Insinuations of foul play follow, and Leftrin bristles at the insult but does not avenge it in the moment. The questions being raised, however, the Council is obliged to determine that Leftrin’s success must be affirmed before payment can be released. In the wake thereof, Leftrin presents a message to Malta, along with a token that affirms his report. Amid the ensuring tumult, he departs.

Leftrin’s legalistic refusal of the Council’s demand for a report, concocted with Alise’s assistance, calls to mind The Merchant of Venice 4.1. For all its anti-Semitism (and there is no shortage of ink spent to the discussion thereof, such that I do not need to contribute to it) the scene points out that a society that binds itself by explicit contracts does well to mind the particulars of those contracts–including what is omitted from them. It also points out, however, that there is peril in relying upon such legal niceties; Shylock, remember, comes to an end he would not prefer for insisting upon the letter of his contract against advice and remuneration. And Leftrin does find himself somewhat stymied by legalistic maneuvering, so there is some small part of that at work.

Whether Leftrin will suffer more…well, in many narratives, he would be certain not to do so, but Hobb does not hesitate to make her characters suffer, and greatly.

One of the things that I and others note in Hobb’s writing is a marked effort towards verisimilitude. It’s something about which she comments (and which, I admit, I often reference). People manipulating legal proceedings and documents is certainly enough of a commonplace, in the United States and elsewhere, that it carries with it the Tolkienian “inner consistency of reality” that fosters Coleridgean willingness to suspend disbelief; that is, it carries verisimilitude. To my mind, the wrangling with the local Council rings true not just of the type, but also of the US-parallel I’ve noted in this reread series I see the Traders’ society as being. Considering the things that I’ve seen happen in local and larger governments and government-like entities, Hobb’s depiction is not just true to life, but true to my life; affective a reading as it is, it is something that makes the text work better for me.

(It’s not a secret that I work with reader-response criticism to a fair degree. I’m not necessarily strongly theoretically grounded in it, to be sure. I’m too far outside academe at this point to be able to maintain such a grounding, given the amount of ongoing reading necessary to do so and the reading-time I must dedicate to other things, not least the primary sourcing for this rereading series. But I digress. Again.)

I don’t imagine, though, that I’m alone in having such a reaction. Hobb’s had enough works published that it’s clear someone keeps buying them, and not only me. While I do have multiple copies of some of her books on my shelf, it’s not enough to keep a publisher producing them. I’m glad there are others doing the work.

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The Work of One Early Afternoon

Sprawled out on the couch
Belt undone and pants unbuttoned in
Summer sunlight sneaking in between the curtains
Where the cat had moved them sticking its head out to look at
Birds hopping across the rocks until they grew too hot
And flittering into the browning branches
One hand fallen on the heart
Breathing in and out in quiet peace

I don’t look nearly so good.
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There is a peace in a quiet time
After the tacos have been eaten and
Cups of coffee drunk
Washing away the cares of the world for a while
Baptism performed by no clergy
But ministry of self to self
Following no order of worship but
Soothing the soul no less for that

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We Have a New Summer Goddess

Aestas may well dance her dance
Auxo joining the choreography
And Damia, too,
And all leave panting those in their audience
And sticky wet with salty fluid
But their performances are of gentler kind than
Has taken up residence in the bleached-white hills
Where brown columns crookedly rise and
Their hangings fade

Like this, yes.
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No stola for her who performs now
No diaphanous gown of clinging gossamer
No translucent tulle that lets things show through
Which many eyes long to see
No organza that covers but refuses to conceal
Oh, no
If she is clad in anything
If anything stands between her and the eye
It is cracking leather
The only thing to match the ways in which
She beats upon the brows and bodies of
Those assembled in her august presence
Early though they might well be

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A Robin Hobb Rereading Series: Entry 358: City of Dragons, Chapter 8

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As another hateful missive from Kim in Cassarick reaches Detozi in Trehaug, this one treating infestations and allegations, “Other Lives” begins with Carson and Sedric conferring about the reasons behind the choice of Kelsingra’s location. The shifting shape of their life together receives some attention, as does their living situation–the latter of which rankles against the cleanly Sedric as Relpda’s hunger begins to press upon his mind. Sedric notes differences between his current and former lovers, and he and Carson confer together about their relationship and about the dragons that are in their care.

Not a bad snack.
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Thymara and Rapskal elsewhere confer abut Heeby’s increasing carrying capacity, which Rapskal demonstrates with little regard for Thymara’s wishes. Thymara arrives at realizations bout herself as Rapskal conducts her to Kelsingra. After an awkward dismount, Thymara surveys the city, Rapskal explaining his understanding of it and his inability to accurately convey that understanding to the others in their party. Thymara struggles to process the information and her place within it, and she comes to accept Rapskal’s assertions that they have but to remember the magic available to them as nascent Elderlings. That magic inheres in memory stone, and Thymara recoils at engaging with the material and the memories within, but Rapskal is able to persuade her to make the attempt at doing so.

Sintara grouses at having not been tended by Thymara, and her vexation is interrupted by the realization that Thymara is no longer accessible to her. Sintara reasons this means Thymara is dead, and she considers what other keeper she would take. She also reasons that Thymara’s death is Heeby’s fault, and she rages against the other dragon, and in her anger, she takes to the sky, exulting for a moment in doing so before becoming aware of doing so and faltering for a moment. In panic, Sintara makes a pair of shaky kills, taking heart and finding rest in doing so.

An interlude of a shared memory of long-ago lovers falling into an assignation follows. Thymara begins to emerge from the shared memory as Rapskal, still caught in it, presses forward with the assignation. A chance comment snaps Thymara fully from the memory, and she rebukes Rapskal bitterly as he attempts to explain matters. The explanation fails to satisfy, and Thymara stalks off, the prospect of falling into memories again calling to her until she realizes, belatedly, Sintara’s peril.

The present chapter reinforces the connection between the Elderlings and the Skill that I have noted, not only in my recent discussion of “Dragon Dreams,” but also in earlier entries in this series. Tintaglia’s connection to Nettle in the Tawny Man novels suggests the connection quite strongly, as does Selden Vestrit’s behavior in Buckkeep, and so does the propensity of Skill-users to find their way to the old stone-quarry and carve themselves into dragons. Thymara’s immersion in the memories of the long-dead Amarinda echoes the dangers of Skill-euphoria against which Fitz is warned and the perils of which he knows well, and Rapskal’s conduct is hardly a commendation. (I must note, though, that Rapskal, being under the influence of another stored personality, may not be wholly responsible for his actions. It’s not unlike intoxication in some regards, but there is an active sentience at work in the memory stones that is not found at the bottom of any cup or in the smoke of any toke.) So there is more thematic unity to be found in the Elderlings corpus, which is to its good.

The interchange between Sedric and Carson at the beginning of the chapter attracts my interest for a number of reasons, most of which have to do with my continued affective reading. Living where I do as I do (the rural Texas Hill Country), and being the kind of person that I am (a nerd, and a particularly bookish one), I understand Sedric’s…misalignment with the demands of living in the outskirts of Kelsingra. I, too, prefer to bathe regularly and to dress in clean, dry clothes; I, too, know that I would not do well if I were left to my own devices to find food and shelter outside of the comforts of civilization, that I would need assistance that I have nothing approaching a right to expect. At the same time, I also understand Carson’s attitude; I, too, want to make sure that those I love have what they want, and I grow frustrated at my all-too-limited ability to provide it to them. Again, I know it to be affective and therefore not necessarily desirable reading, but I am who I am. Clearly.

I note, too, amid Rapskal’s discussion of the Elderling civilization centered on Kelsingra a certain…parallel to another still-too-present feature of life in the United States: segregation. Rapskal remarks that “That side over there, all those huts and things, those were built for the humans….This side, all of this, this is for us” (149-50); it reads to me like a clear physical separation of people, and one distinctly unequal in application and benefit. It reads to me like a ghettoization of the have-nots within eyeshot of the haves, where each must look upon the other with something not apt to be love. A person might wonder what might end up being tried in what passes for the small towns thereabouts.

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Something Else Rememebered from Teaching

The usual lines are being trotted out
Again
And again
That school is for getting a job
And I know the echoes are coming back
Saying who the customer is
And that the customer is always right

“Yes, students, and if he’d read the syllabus…”
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They have it wrong
Of course
Because that model’s a bad one
But you have to meet students where they are
So it might be said
If we’re going to follow the model
That the student’s not the customer
Their prospective employers are
And their teachers are as much quality control
As they are factory tools

It somehow never seems to occur
That the students are materials
Shaped and processed by the processes–
And
Indeed
The doctors who teach and who teach teachers
Draw out
Wire from billets
Billets from ore–
And that sometimes
The raw stuff has to be discarded
And even what has been processed once
Fails when it is made from
Basic stuff into
More complex machinery

A few seem to get the point
And stop their parts in that choir
But others never do
And scream on
Out of tune

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Fleeced

They talk so often of
Not being sheep
Not wanting to blindly follow along
But then themselves
Run to the bell that rings
And eagerly look
To be grabbed by the crook

Not so seasonal…
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Possessed as I am of
A curving horn I’d
Gladly oppose to
Some other’s head or butting
I’ve no desire to be shorn

Too often
The cutter comes too close
Taking more than what grows back easily

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A Robin Hobb Rereading Series: Entry 357: City of Dragons, Chapter 7

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Following a brief missive that warns of illness among the cotes, “Dragon Dreams” opens with Sintara dreaming of easy flight and a full belly as she returns to Kelsingra. The dream consists of ancestral memories, tantalizingly incomplete, from which she wakes amid a storm, cramped and cold and hungry. Grousing about Thymara and the other keepers, and the arrangements they have made, she reviews the current situation and stalks out into a nearby meadow. There, she reflects further, and she begrudgingly attempts to practice flight in the pre-dawn dark.

Not quite…
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Meanwhile, Alise huddles against the inclement weather, reflecting on her situation (taken regularly to Kelsingra by Heeby) and the likely whereabouts of Leftrin (aboard the Tarman, nearing Cassarick), mourning for the changes she know will come. She determines to wander and take in all she can of the city, and her progress through it is described. Exploring, she finds a room carved in figures of jesters and performers, which she accidentally activates with a touch upon a vein of magic in the stone. It startles her momentarily, and she soon mourns for what she knows will be lost.

Alise leaves the room, finding the weather cleared and herself recalling Leftrin’s words to her upon his parting a month previously. She settles in to eat lunch, forcing herself away from thoughts of material comforts that intrude upon her, and her continued survey of Kelsingra is detailed. Proceeding further, Alise finds herself surrounded by the memories embedded in the stones of the city, losing some time amid them. As she goes yet further, though, she finds a room that seems to have been despoiled already, which revelation angers her, and she blames Rapskal for it. She does realize, however, that the room in which she finds herself shows a map of Kelsingra, which revelation brings her hope, and she makes her way out to where Heeby awaits her.

The present chapter reflects at some length on the likelihood of destruction in the interest of moneymaking. I cannot help but see a number of parallels at work, both to the early United States (to which I have long held the Traders are akin) and to contemporary events. Alise’s lament that the statues of Kelsingra will be pillaged, the worked materials separated from their contexts and auctioned off a piece at a time, is one that echoes comments about older (and still too-current) museum and antiquary practices, such things as have led to bits and pieces of grave offerings and monuments being taken across countries and continents, displayed as showcases for passers-by to gawk at them or hoarded in collections so that dragon-like collectors can gaze upon them in greedy delight, taking them as evidence of their superiority. And they also seem to ring to me of the kind of comment I hear from folks who’ve lived in the Hill Country longer or more continuously than I have, that people coming in and building up what had previously been rolling hills of oak and cedar and mesquite that echoed flatly in the still heat of summer air ruins the very thing that they seek who come here.

It is a mark of good artwork in any medium that it speaks both to contexts of composition and contexts of reception clearly.

It is of some interest to me that, for all the work that the Rain Wilders did to harvest the leavings of the Elderlings’s other settlements, they seem to have little understanding of what those things harvested do. Admittedly, the Skill seems to be largely a thing of the Six Duchies, but, given broader contexts, it does seem bound up with the Elderlings, and it is strange that the calling-ritual conducted in the Six Duchies would have found no respondents among the Rain Wilders and Bingtowners, especially given that those touched by the Rain Wilds are suggested to have some sensitivity to the Skill. It’s another instance, to my eye, of problems attendant upon canon-welding, but, while I might note that a thing is there and causes some issue, I acknowledge that I have not the insight or ability to offer any advice. And it would be presumptuous as all hell to think that I ought to, anyway.

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Get the Lighter Fluid

The burn bans are back on
Sensibly enough
Red-lettered signs standing at the edge of each precinct
Prayers that some random spark will not become
A conflagration that will consume all it touches

Time for fajitas!
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The question I have is
How long will it be until
Somebody thinking himself–
And it’s not every man
But it’s always a man
As the saying goes–
Some kind of pitmaster
Skilled beyond the ken of those who
Do the work day in and out
And know better than to light up their grills
In the dry heat and stiff breezes
Will determine that his right to a well-done steak
Trumps the rights of other not to be cooked

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Another after an Older Style

I‘ve long since learned the lines prescribed,
Measured the mind-ways that must be observed,
Rituals recalled, planted by rote,
Formulas falling, foals from their dams,
And often recited them. Each has its aim,
Purpose for the people it presses its way.

Indeed so.
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They make up a mask I must wear in the world,
Face-saving façade of fluid appearance,
Selected for scenes whose steps are determined
By directors long dead and gone into dust.
Heavy their hands are, hard on the shoulders,
Firm in their grip as Grendel’s grim ending.

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A Robin Hobb Rereading Series: Entry 356: City of Dragons, Chapter 6

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After a missive noting formal complaint of message tampering and advising caution and documentation, “Marked by the Rain Wilds” opens with Malta and Jani Khuprus conferring together about the former’s plans. Malta notes her intent to accompany Reyn to Cassarick, hoping for news of the Tarman. The relationship between mother- and daughter-in-law is glossed, along with the history of the Rain Wilds Traders and the tree-cities they built. Jani advises Malta to dress to impress, and the two talk frankly of pregnancies and miscarraiges. Business partners’ labor practices are discussed as matters of concern, as well, as are concerns of integration of the Tattooed into Rain Wild society.

Progress…
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Talk returns to Malta’s pregnancy and the difficulties attendant upon it, not only those for pregnancies in general, but also the specific concerns that the Rain Wilds impose. The stark choices that face Malta–and all mothers in the Rain Wilds–are noted, and Malta’s reactions to them are glossed as she tries to distract herself with necessary tasks. She also reflects on her personal history following her reception by the Satrap. The reverie and discussion are interrupted by Reyn’s arrival and jesting with his wife and mother. Jani excuses herself, and Reyn conducts his wife to their waiting transport, the pair joining Reyn’s sister, Tillamon, along the way. Some tension with Tillamon is noted, and the group proceeds.

As they make for their ship, the River Snake, developments in shipbuilding and the implications for Rain Wild trade are discussed. The trio boards and is scarcely settled in before the ship gets underway, and Malta finds herself considering herself and her sister-in-law, and talk turns to that end briefly before going to concerns of pregnancy and midwifery. The dragon keepers are cited as beacons of hope for children who would otherwise be discarded, and Malta and Reyn determine to leave the fate of their coming child in divine hands.

There are several clear parallels that arise for me as I reread the present chapter. I’ve noted before my interpretation of Bingtown and the Rain Wilds as a gloss on the early United States. In keeping with that, I have to read the discussion of the Tattooed as a parallel to those surrounding enslaved populations in the United States and the ongoing effects of that ancestral wrong that persist into the present day. I’ve also noted having long lived in central Texas, and so I cannot help but read in the present chapter echoes of discussions surrounding immigration that I have heard and still hear, and not always gladly. Both sociohistorical items are heavily racially charged, and in the novel, the parallels are also based around what might well be termed racial or ethnic divisions (largely but not exclusively indicated by skin, in the event). There is the usual frustration of the parallels by Hobb; the Tattooed are marked as such, rather than born as such, and the Rain Wilds Traders are not the icons of “purity” upon which the wrong-headed racist / ethnocentric / supremacist discourses Hobb obliquely references (deliberately or otherwise does not matter) rely. They yet remain clear enough to be issues of discussion, however, both in themselves and in how they reinforce ideas of the sourcing for the Elderlings novels.

Another that comes across to me is the parallel between the discussion of Malta’s pregnancy and discussions of abortion and other reproductive rights. When the novel was published, in 2012, arguments surrounding abortion rights were particularly heated in legislatures, with a remarkably high number of restrictions on those rights put into place. I reread the chapter now and write in the wake of the 2022 Dobbs decision. Other, lower-profile, pieces of legislation addressing other reproductive rights has crowded in between, much of it conducing to strip from those who must bear the burdens of reproduction control of that reproduction. “Just keep your legs closed” is not good advice (though “keep your pecker in your pants” is). It’s a concern that emerges repeatedly in Hobb’s work, the Realm of the Elderlings and elsewhere (as noted here, among others), and it’s one with which people still too much grapple, usually to the detriment of those affected.

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